Kia ora my name is Ellakaye. I really enjoyed your easter acrostic poem. Your easter eggs made me a bit hungry . Why did you decide to write about Easter?
Hi Metuakore my name is Nese. I like your Easter acrostic poem. Next time you could put full stops at the end of your sentences. Did looking for Easter egg pictures make you hungry for chocolate?
Kia ora Metuakore my name is Emora. I liked your acrostic poem. Have you tried to put full stops at the end of your sentences. How did you get such a colourful?
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ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is Ellakaye.
I really enjoyed your easter acrostic poem.
Your easter eggs made me a bit hungry .
Why did you decide to write about Easter?
ReplyDeleteHi Metuakore my name is Nese.
I like your Easter acrostic poem.
Next time you could put full stops at the end of your sentences.
Did looking for Easter egg pictures make you hungry for chocolate?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Metuakore my name is Emora.
I liked your acrostic poem.
Have you tried to put full stops at the end of your sentences.
How did you get such a colourful?